Short Story Contest 3 Winner - "The Blue Girl" by Shaphat - Page 5

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Post by Tomiwa » 01 May 2017, 11:02

lesson fro this story,mind what u say cause u dont know who is listening.walls have hears they say.the story is some how scary too.

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Post by Michelle Chetty » 02 May 2017, 05:41

I love all stories that touch on the unknown.

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Post by Belynda White » 17 May 2017, 17:15

Awesome story!? I totally loved it.

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Post by NICA ALBERT RANCES » 20 May 2017, 01:09

I little bit scary and interesting story. And Im sorry but form the very start I already knew btesy mother will going to diee..

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Post by Felecia Jude » 23 May 2017, 23:51

Trilling with sad ending. Have fun reading

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Post by BoyLazy » 30 Sep 2017, 02:31

Congrats

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Post by Jadenchristine » 22 Dec 2017, 04:29

Very good creative writing with a great imagination!

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Post by Paul78 » 27 Dec 2017, 22:19

A good story with lessons to learn. Do not wish somebody evil as it may come back to you as well.

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