Short Story Contest 3 Winner - "The Blue Girl" by Shaphat

The deadline for the second contest has already passed and the stories are available for reading. It had a Spring theme, and the winner got a $25 gift certificate. Stay tuned for information regarding another contest!
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How do you rate this story?

1 star - poor, bad
4
7%
2 stars - fair, okay
17
30%
3 stars - good, recommend it
21
37%
4 stars - amazing, excellent
15
26%
 
Total votes: 57

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Re: Short Story Contest 3 Winner - "The Blue Girl" by Shapha

Post by Selena Marie price » 20 Apr 2017, 10:04

i like the story

-- 20 Apr 2017, 10:04 --

i like the story

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Post by andy g » 25 Apr 2017, 14:40

wow..that story gave me chills, really enjoyed it.

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Post by Tomiwa » 01 May 2017, 11:02

lesson fro this story,mind what u say cause u dont know who is listening.walls have hears they say.the story is some how scary too.

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Post by Michelle Chetty » 02 May 2017, 05:41

I love all stories that touch on the unknown.

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Post by Belynda White » 17 May 2017, 17:15

Awesome story!? I totally loved it.
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Post by NICA ALBERT RANCES » 20 May 2017, 01:09

I little bit scary and interesting story. And Im sorry but form the very start I already knew btesy mother will going to diee..

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Post by Felecia Jude » 23 May 2017, 23:51

Trilling with sad ending. Have fun reading

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Post by BoyLazy » 30 Sep 2017, 02:31

Congrats
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Post by Jadenchristine » 22 Dec 2017, 04:29

Very good creative writing with a great imagination!

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Post by Paul78 » 27 Dec 2017, 22:19

A good story with lessons to learn. Do not wish somebody evil as it may come back to you as well.
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Post by uyky » 11 Jan 2018, 15:11

It was a good story, but I was expecting a twist. The ending was expected and it was quite cliche. But still very nicely written.

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Post by Suave » 28 Jan 2018, 20:30

Good story

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Post by Jobeezah » 20 Mar 2018, 05:00

It's a nice story

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Post by Enabor21885 » 31 Mar 2018, 05:13

Good story :D

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Post by Joules just b » 02 May 2018, 01:25

the story is good and i think it will be better to have this in the small screen

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