Unbroken Heart

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Noraine Alissa Poria
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Re: Unbroken Heart

Post by Noraine Alissa Poria »

I enjoyed reading this poem. it's really great I hope you write more of it.
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Donnabells
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Post by Donnabells »

This poem is as pure as snow.
And you're right, once an unbroken heart starts to open...it is now vurnerable and might get broken.
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Ariana6216
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Post by Ariana6216 »

I honestly don't think that the title fit very week fit that kind of poem face I did feel sadness and heart ache as if the heart has broken. Completely the opposite
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Post by juliamenez »

This poem is beautiful, touching, and deep. Beautiful words!
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Erekz
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Post by Erekz »

Life itself is a beautiful sight to see, but when every other life challenges breaks in, life seems to be worthless and you eventually get broken.. nice piece
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Post by imSunshine »

It is actually a sad ending, i thought from the title it would end up with a fighting spirit, anyway good one
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