Memories

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Memories

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Memories like flip of pages
Memories like thorns and roses
Memories reflect our past
Memories like works of art hanging on the walls of a Gallery ,
We reminisce just by looking at them.
Thinking of the times when we wish we had done things differently
We make memories everyday.
We can make new and happy ones starting from now.
Memories are our own stories.
Lets make them worth looking at .
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Post by Clifora »

This seems like a great work of poetry. It sounds so...deep. Great job on the poem! (Wait did you write it?)
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Post by Abigail09 »

Yes I did .Thank you .
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Post by Zion Mesa »

Simple but sweet
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Post by Abigail09 »

Thank you
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Post by adamgreenrock »

Short and simple, but effective. I really love your work here. Thanks for sharing your poetry!
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Post by Abigail09 »

:D :) :lol: :tiphat:
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Post by kumkum27 »

That's deep and amazing.
Would just suggest a thing there should be the word " are " in the first two lines after memories.
Other than that it is soothing to the soul
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Post by Me_Read »

Nice poem, I like how it calls to action change in the memories that people make on a daily basis,
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Post by Fernando Purba »

a very good poem. Instantly can bring us to remember the past
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Post by Abigail09 »

:tiphat:
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Post by gayscott »

Memories are very important. I enjoyed your poem. Great job!
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Post by bellajavier »

This poem is so beautiful! You did a great job with this one. Its so soothing and calm poem.
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:) 8) :tiphat:
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Post by Kayzed »

I love the way you're broad in your imagery of memories. The way you bring out an abstract entity through concrete relateable representations.
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