My babygirl before she was born

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breleah98
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Wiggly little baby all around
Even if you don't make a sound
You wiggled your way into my heart
And this was from the very start
Mommy loves you so very much
I can't wait to feel your touch
Wiggly little baby all around
Mommy was lost, but now I'm found!💖
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Both of your poems were quite cute. I loved them. I'm sure they mean a lot to your husband, and every child wants evidence of their mother's love. Great job and keep a safe record of those poems! Those kinds of things soothe loved ones on dark nights. :)

You gave me a smile. I hope that I returned the favor. :)
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Post by Joynal »

The poem is really a good one with lucidity and simplicity!
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Post by Homeschooler7 »

This poem is so sincerely beautiful, I was close to tears. Being the oldest of 5 I have seen my mom feel all of these things and such a deep sadness at the loss of a child. I have felt the movement of a baby in the womb and loved that little brother or sister from the very start. I too write poetry but this... this is poetry to touch the heart of anyone. So, thank you.
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