My heart bleeds

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NaanaKuukua
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My heart bleeds

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My heart bleeds for the lost years, disappointment and pain.
My heart bleeds for the lost souls and carnal minds.
My heart bleeds for the anguish I feel knowing it can never be.
My heart bleeds knowing not how He might have felt on the cross.
But my heart knows He went through it all for you and me.
So my heart bleeds no more for He paid the ultimate price and bled for me and you.
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Post by Noraine Alissa Poria »

this poem is a good one, keeo writing.
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Damar Diallice
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Post by Damar Diallice »

the poem is encouraging..keep it up
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Post by Kingsley237 »

It's very nice and interesting.
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