Love Sonnet 107

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Re: Love Sonnet 107

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Thankfully, the quarantine provisions would soon permit the kissing part, and I could "one-oh-seven" as permissible.
"In the beginning was the word.........John 1:1"
...To delineate the times that lovers miss,
...A thousand dreams can't beat a single kiss.

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Samwisekoop wrote: 05 Jun 2020, 09:04
ReyvrexQuestor Reyes wrote: 04 Jun 2020, 19:24
Samwisekoop wrote: 26 May 2020, 20:18
You know, this sonnet is one good alibi to "one-oh-seven (107) a kiss" from a long missed acquaintance when you meet again.
Yes, definitely! I bet lots of people will relate to this sonnet during quarantine! Thankfully, though, it is mostly over!! :D :D :D
The overriding theme of this sonnet is about a "kiss" that lovers miss. Unfortunately, on these times of the pandemic, that is precisely what the medical protocol for "social distancing" is vehemently prohibiting -- the kiss. So, going back to the "dream" that is where the kissing would only be permitted, lol. Stay safe.
"In the beginning was the word.........John 1:1"
...To delineate the times that lovers miss,
...A thousand dreams can't beat a single kiss.

-reyvrex (Love Sonnet 107)
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ReyvrexQuestor Reyes wrote: 17 Aug 2020, 22:53
Samwisekoop wrote: 05 Jun 2020, 09:04
ReyvrexQuestor Reyes wrote: 04 Jun 2020, 19:24

You know, this sonnet is one good alibi to "one-oh-seven (107) a kiss" from a long missed acquaintance when you meet again.
Yes, definitely! I bet lots of people will relate to this sonnet during quarantine! Thankfully, though, it is mostly over!! :D :D :D
The overriding theme of this sonnet is about a "kiss" that lovers miss. Unfortunately, on these times of the pandemic, that is precisely what the medical protocol for "social distancing" is vehemently prohibiting -- the kiss. So, going back to the "dream" that is where the kissing would only be permitted, lol. Stay safe.
Haha! Yeah. :D
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Replied just now. Yes, if I am to choose, I'd rather that I get even just one simple kiss than a thousand dreams.
"In the beginning was the word.........John 1:1"
...To delineate the times that lovers miss,
...A thousand dreams can't beat a single kiss.

-reyvrex (Love Sonnet 107)
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