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Use this forum to post poetry that you have written. This is for getting comments and constructive feedback. This is for original, creative works. You must post the actual text, no links. Only one poem per topic please.
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Why
Why do u play with my heart?
Why do u keep coming back?
I left u for a reason... U proved u didnt.
care.
I moved on.. I dont want to see u.
anymore.
Why do u keep coming back?
Why do u think it will be better this
time?
I cant play games with u.
I cant pretend i love u .. When i dont.
Why cant u leave me alone?
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It's a good start but more room for improvement
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