Love Sonnet 135
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Love Sonnet 135
Our love has thrived above board all the time,
That scribes above would note regards our fate,
Perhaps, we have enough of deeds sublime,
For sure access enjoyed at Heaven's gate;
No need to press review of glorious acts,
Or pester Heaven's keeper with demands,
You have been virtuous, on angelic tracts,
On paths not swerved, and far from reprimands;
Yet should our mirth confront but bolted doors,
We'll wait outside, encamped in desert tents
As would bedouin sheiks and troubadours,
Until all settles to our hearts intents;
.......But even now, with you here by my side,
.......To call it less than Heaven, I deride.
---Reyvrex Questor Reyes
...To delineate the times that lovers miss,
...A thousand dreams can't beat a single kiss.
-reyvrex (Love Sonnet 107)
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Thanks for sharing!
― Steven Wright
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Thanks for visiting buddy, and thanks for the encouraging remark. You have nice literary pieces yourself that I have viewed. Thanks for sharing.
...To delineate the times that lovers miss,
...A thousand dreams can't beat a single kiss.
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Thanks for giving me the honor of being your first post. I appreciate and need your critique. Thanks for sharing your time.
...To delineate the times that lovers miss,
...A thousand dreams can't beat a single kiss.
-reyvrex (Love Sonnet 107)
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With regards to rhyme, the rhyming scheme is based on "masculine rhyme" or "end rhymes" which a rhyming dictionary could offer a reference for. Thanks, you have noticed.
...To delineate the times that lovers miss,
...A thousand dreams can't beat a single kiss.
-reyvrex (Love Sonnet 107)
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Our love has thrived above board all the time;
That, scribes above would note regards our fate,
Thank you
...To delineate the times that lovers miss,
...A thousand dreams can't beat a single kiss.
-reyvrex (Love Sonnet 107)