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Oh, you dastardly little swish tailed dot

How I love thee not!

You dastardly little swish tailed dot

Writers do tremble in fear

When your time draws near

Editors sigh oh, dear

not here I fear

You dastardly little swish tailed dot

How I love thee not

You dastardly little swish tail dot

Like a bug's footprint in butter

You make me mutter

Driving me crazy like no other

Everyone thinks I am a nutter

You dastardly little swish tailed dot

I love you not
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Post by Sherry Barrow »

Hahaha! Commas can be brats to deal with, I agree. Makes me crazy when they appear where they shouldn't. Great poem! Made me grin.
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Oh, you dastardly little swish tailed dot

How I love thee not!

You dastardly little swish tailed dot

Writers do tremble in fear

When your time draws near

Editors sigh oh, dear

not here I fear

You dastardly little swish tailed dot

How I love thee not

You dastardly little swish tail dot

Like a bug's footprint in butter

You make me mutter

Driving me crazy like no other

Everyone thinks I am a nutter

You dastardly little swish tailed dot

I love you not
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