The Sand Lost in the Wind

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The Sand Lost in the Wind

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The Sand Lost in the Wind


In the deepest pits of despair
we find our infinite well of hope

Facing the greatest of losses
we find our invincible wealth

The sand lost in the winds
reveals the heavy jewel beneath.




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"That virtue we appreciate is as much ours as another's. We see so much only as we possess." - Henry David Thoreau

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Beautiful! Thanks for sharing! :-)
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The amount of pain in the face of losses
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