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Iveme
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My little one

Let the mighty Frufihanna water fall, falls in mourning,
The birds of Kisive mountain sing the mourning songs with me,
As the Hufoje trees sway to the mourning sounds.
My heart groans with pain, for you my little one.
Hefakena our village, mourn with me and Mura our playground, follow us.
Motuo our clan and blood, stands helplessly,
In Daulo, the mountain of Kenangi roll down beside you in sorrow.
My little one, you are strong as Kozumo stone but gentle as Ketezafi hapa.
I cannot be there but little Eden is there and others too.
May you find peace and rested for you have completed your race.
Loving you always
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This is really beautiful, I hope whoever you're writing to receives the love and sincerity I can feel through your words.
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Beautiful💖
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