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sophiab23
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I like the symbolism of arrows
I like that they have to be pulled backwards before they fly
I like that sometimes life pulls you back before letting you soar
I like that sometimes the lows, make the highs seem higher
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Beautiful poem. 🏹🏹🏹 Life has it's ups and downs, highs and lows. And the last line is truer than we think.
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I like this poem :)
Hope to read more from you!
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Lovely poem, I never knew how much we could learn from the symbolism of arrows until now. Thank you.
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Absolutely loved your poem. Motivational and inspiring using just a few words.
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I like how the poem starts out simple and breaks into something more powerful than I could've ever predicted.

Gorgeous, just gorgeous.
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I love this poem, short but very meaningful, to me it describes life ups and downs... It is a powerful poem..I give the author a 5star.. sincerely it's one of the best poem have come across
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