The eyes,

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Angelyn Gumbs
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The eyes,

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How they see the world,
From a little spec to a better point of view.
For what the eyes has behold.
Sadness this is true ,
moving forward to the tired eyes can't lie.
From love at first sight , to the eclipse of the sun.
Those eyes, Those eyes,
whether big or small, to them that are brightly colored and those that are darken too.
The eyes that reflects the moon.
The eyes that are full of fear.
The eyes that show of weakness with strength indulging alongside.
Yes we know that it's long overdue.
There's eyes that only stare,
and those that carries knowledge.
There's eyes that stay close filled with emptiness and pure evil.
The eyes has seeing and done it all.
Now as I open my eyes to see , "Beauty,
Oh Joy!"
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I am wondering what influenced you to write The eye. It sounds so deep.
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