Untitled

Use this forum to post poetry that you have written. This is for getting comments and constructive feedback. This is for original, creative works. You must post the actual text, no links. Only one poem per topic please.
Post Reply
User avatar
thisgirl818
Posts: 69
Joined: 06 Apr 2018, 05:02
Bookshelf Size: 0

Untitled

Post by thisgirl818 »

your arms is the the only place I know
I close my eyes at this stolen moment
if only forever could last for another day
I'd stay in your arms

your smile is the only beautiful memory I know
I close my eyes and picture it once again
if only love could last another day
I'd promise I'd take your breath away
User avatar
Joseph_ngaruiya
Posts: 1198
Joined: 09 Apr 2020, 09:37
Currently Reading:
Bookshelf Size: 76
Reviewer Page: onlinebookclub.org/reviews/by-joseph-ngaruiya.html
Latest Review: The Napoleone's heroes by Gianfranco Menghini

Post by Joseph_ngaruiya »

Please 🥺 build up on this poem. I wish I could read further.
Discipline is the bridge between goals and accomplishment.
Post Reply

Return to “Creative Original Works: Poetry”