Suicide thought before dying

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Suicide thought before dying

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She never wanted it.
The situation makes her wish for it only.
She would have continued to live a blissful life...
... had she not been engulfed in what made her resort for a quit.
It made her wish for it so much it came.
Nothing sadden the dead than realising they never lived.
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Post by kgosana_wonders »

This is incredible! I like how it portrays suicide something that creeps on someone disguised as a 'solution' to one's problems
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