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Amalia Lantano
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Your love gives me strength
Your hug gives me comfort
Your advice makes me wise
Your smile gives me assurance

Difficulties pulled me down
Your prayers gave me the strength to get up on my own
Failures destroy my dreams
Your hand completes all my dreams

Nightmares are at bay
Your light keeps them away
Troubles come and play
You come and stay

Words not enough to tell
How wonderful your tales
Always remembered your stories in my heart
You know that you will always be in my heart
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Motherly love. Amazing.
Discipline is the bridge between goals and accomplishment.
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Fantastic words for the most fabulous in each person's life.
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A beautiful piece to all the beautiful angels in this world!
"Even the smallest person can change the course of the future." - Galadriel
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Beautiful and heartfelt. Thank you for sharing your poem.
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