Broken Bones
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Broken Bones
Have broken bones
But words can kill the laughter.
Dust and dirt
Don't cause much hurt
But sneers can choke the joy.
Snow and rain
Can't cause a maim
But thoughtless deeds can cause a storm.
- ReyvrexQuestor Reyes
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Yes, the tongue is a double-edged sword. We need to be carful what we say to others for it can deeply hurt them. Thank you for stopping by and commenting!ReyvrexQuestor Reyes wrote: ↑30 May 2020, 02:18 Words and deeds can bring more havoc than the natural elements. It seems the hurt we suffer are mostly man-made, more than that caused by nature. Deep poem.
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Thank you!Sumansona1344 wrote: ↑30 May 2020, 05:23 This poem can be felt at a deeper level. I liked how you compared natural and man made things.
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Yes, you are right. We should be careful to make our words tasteful enough -- just in case we have to take it back and eat it up.Samwisekoop wrote: ↑30 May 2020, 12:05Yes, the tongue is a double-edged sword. We need to be careful what we say to others for it can deeply hurt them. Thank you for stopping by and commenting!ReyvrexQuestor Reyes wrote: ↑30 May 2020, 02:18 Words and deeds can bring more havoc than the natural elements. It seems the hurt we suffer are mostly man-made, more than that caused by nature. Deep poem.
...To delineate the times that lovers miss,
...A thousand dreams can't beat a single kiss.
-reyvrex (Love Sonnet 107)