Nature

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Emi Waseimoala
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Sun rays caressing my eyebrows
The breeze wafting by
Scent of flowers awakening my senses
Secrets of nature I adore

Oh wake me in the morning
The touch of dewdrops I yearn
Birds of dawn singing sweetly
It is nature at its core

I imagine waterfalls in its nakedness
Barely clothed by greenery
The surrounding forest existing as muscled guardsmen
Behold natures lore

Against an ethereal blue backdrop
Voluminous clouds gather
Depending on weathers' mood
Spectacular nature follows suit
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Post by asisah innocent1 »

The imagery is superb
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Post by HSwilliams123 »

Nature comes to you in this poem, you can see nature in this poem, as you read.
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