The Girl Upstairs

Use this forum to post poetry that you have written. This is for getting comments and constructive feedback. This is for original, creative works. You must post the actual text, no links. Only one poem per topic please.
Post Reply
User avatar
Posts: 4
Joined: 05 Nov 2019, 15:33
Bookshelf Size: 0

The Girl Upstairs

Post by scarlettdragone » 01 Dec 2019, 10:04

I've always been so confused.
Always questioning who I am and what I think and what I want and what I am.
But confusion doesn't exist when the girl walks
I don't know her name.
I don't know anything about her.
All I know, is she walks up the stairs and my eyes trail after her, following.
Her hair bounces in ripples.
Her lips twitch into an almost smile.
Her eyes flash briefly of summers.
And she walks up the stairs.
Up and away.

User avatar
Daniel Muky
Posts: 116
Joined: 01 Nov 2019, 05:54
2019 Reading Goal: 24
2019 Reading Goal Completion: 8
Currently Reading:
Bookshelf Size: 17
Reviewer Page:
Latest Review: Strong Heart by Charlie Sheldon

Post by Daniel Muky » 14 Dec 2019, 17:17

That should have been more confusion for me.haha..but nice

User avatar
Posts: 131
Joined: 16 Nov 2019, 11:34
Favorite Author: Oscar Wilde
Favorite Book: Till We Have Faces
Currently Reading:
Bookshelf Size: 131
Reviewer Page:
Latest Review: Serendipity Mystery: Diary of a Snoopy Cat by R.F. Kristi
fav_author_id: 2475

Post by nfdoughe » 15 Dec 2019, 19:05

This is a beautiful sentiment. Nicely written!
"Man is least himself when he talks in his own person. Give him a mask, and he will tell you the truth."
~Oscar Wilde

User avatar
Posts: 165
Joined: 03 Oct 2019, 13:25
2019 Reading Goal: 10
2019 Reading Goal Completion: 90
Currently Reading:
Bookshelf Size: 25
Reviewer Page:
Latest Review: E-M-P Honeymoon by Dorothy May Mercer

Post by nicole-adrianne » 01 Jan 2020, 13:57

This poem proves how many secret, strange admirers we all have each day.
* * *
One feels like a duck, splashing around in all this wet. And when one feels like a duck, one is happy!

Post Reply

Return to “Creative Original Works: Poetry”