Love poetry

Use this forum to post poetry that you have written. This is for getting comments and constructive feedback. This is for original, creative works. You must post the actual text, no links. Only one poem per topic please.
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Danzbby
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Love poetry

Post by Danzbby » 09 Nov 2019, 07:30

What is love when there is no faith..
No commitment, No Space
How can you say you love me?
If you don’t know my place
Don’t let my love go to waste.

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Post by nfdoughe » 22 Nov 2019, 15:35

It's short, it's sweet, and I like the way the sounds move. I think it's beautiful.

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