Two chirping birds

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Two chirping birds

Post by Neha++ » 14 Sep 2019, 08:52

Two Chirping Birds

On tree so high beautiful and green ,
sat two birds listening melodious wind,
Down shines the river crystal clear and clean.


One boy came started throwing stones at  them,
Afraid and worried they flew from there,
What a bad boy, such a shame.


Near a river was a bog,  
while playing around boy got stuck,
to get out, he tried a lot and slog .


That flying birds, saw him stuck,
Forgetting about stones, they flew to find help,
One mile away found a man, it was good luck.


Insisting that man to follow them,
Two birds started chirping around his head,
near came the bog, man saw the boy,
saved his life but boy was half dead.

Such a courageous deed, done by birds,
But still their story remains unheard,
Still around that tree, can hear birds chirps.

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Post by Ekta Swarnkar » 14 Sep 2019, 11:52

Nice poetry!
I believe that their story will not be unheard anymore.😊
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Post by Juliet+1 » 21 Sep 2019, 14:14

That's a great poem. A simple story, but it captures so much. Congratulations!

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