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Post by Usha+P »


Sparkle, sparkle spoon
Soup spoon as round as moon

Sparkle, sparkle fork
Four teeth to talk

Sparkle, sparkle spork
Mixture of spoon and fork.

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Post by Ben Moore »

This made me chuckle! What a fun poem!
'All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling' - Oscar Wilde
'Am reading more Oscar Wilde. What a tiresome, affected sod' - Noël Coward

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Post by nicole-adrianne »

I love this and want it engraved on my silver spork. Which, yes, I own.
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Post by Tchrjokes456 »

I feel like you need a superfan to send you odd gifts based off of your fun poems. But not in a creepy way; just a fun fan. This poem is fun and would work well as a contrast to poems with heavier themes in a collection. Thank you for sharing.

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Post by Tobewankenobe »

This poem is so lovely. The words feel good to say, like I'm eating with a sport as I say them.

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