Just told the wind
About my insecurities and fears
And all the nights i spent shedding tears
All the wars between wrong and right
About the things that are good and nice....
All those dreams I have in my heart
All those lovely places I wanna go from the start
Just told the wind...
About the weight of hopes
About the weight of dreams
About the fear of unpredictable future
About the things I couldn't bear
Just told the wind...
And everytime breeze comes my way
All soft and cool ,calming my soul
It soothes and takes all the worries away
And leave me thinking about why I must not give up on my dreams
Why should I work to convert all those blissful dreams into reality
Knowing it would not be easy and i might fail
Bt why not give it a try
It might be possible i'll be able to fly .
Told the wind
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Monishka Sharma
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Told the wind
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mddodgen
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Thought-provoking. The rythm of your prose is interesting. Thank you, I enjoyed reading it.
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Monishka Sharma
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Thank you.
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ReyvrexQuestor Reyes
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The poem has such nice imagery that I liked so much. It is okay, for having Told the Wind albeit, my caveat is don't throw caution to the wind.
"In the beginning was the word.........John 1:1"
...To delineate the times that lovers miss,
...A thousand dreams can't beat a single kiss.
-reyvrex (Love Sonnet 107)
...To delineate the times that lovers miss,
...A thousand dreams can't beat a single kiss.
-reyvrex (Love Sonnet 107)
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