Don't you dare!

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Re: Don't you dare!

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I hear this! You say how I sometimes think and Feel about arrogant people. Good spill.
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The formatting is so interesting. It's constructed like freeform prose. This is another one I'd really like to hear performed.
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aldoralos wrote: 16 Jan 2020, 21:59 I hear this! You say how I sometimes think and Feel about arrogant people. Good spill.

Thank you, I'm glad you could relate
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Tobewankenobe wrote: 23 Jan 2020, 15:40 The formatting is so interesting. It's constructed like freeform prose. This is another one I'd really like to hear performed.
Give me a platform and I'll surely perform it for you. Most of my writing is in freeform prose.
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Good for you to put your foot down and draw boundaries. Your message is quite bold has a sense of consequential freedom.
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I literally read this poem in a brave tone. It feels nice to read. Good one. The words and formation carried the strength and boldness perfectly.
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A powerful piece indeed. Wehave to fight for our own voices, and this inspires me to do so.
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