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Selfish

Posted: 13 Apr 2019, 10:08
by thisgirl818
Love me,
Love me so much
'Till it hurts
So you'll know
Why I cry every night
With the thought of him.

Re: Selfish

Posted: 12 May 2019, 14:35
by ErikaP13
Oh wow, reading this one hurt. You really hit something inside me with this. The poem is beautiful. Well done.

Re: Selfish

Posted: 24 May 2019, 15:03
by Jinxxuxx
It's alright however it's a bit too vague for my taste meaning I could have easily predicted what you was going to say next.
Most people like to be surprised when reading works like this ~ just a friendly opinion ^ ^

Re: Selfish

Posted: 25 Jan 2020, 23:38
by Tobewankenobe
I hope writing these poems helped you like it's helping me.

Re: Selfish

Posted: 04 Feb 2020, 16:18
by Aliciaroseperry1992
I don't see how the title reflects the poem, but I see this having potential!