I wrote a poem

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I wrote a poem

Post by Ayesha Owais » 22 Mar 2019, 05:05

The slow rythem like waves of the sea ease my mind
Trying not to think about you
But my soul is tearing apart deep inside

I was sitting on your bedside
When you closed your eyes
You took my hand and held it tight
You made me promise
And I was astonished
The words you said are still not forgotten
Those words left me in pain
They made the blood cold running in my veins

When I wake up in the morning,the memories of you come flashing in
I know these memories won't ever fade away
When I think about you,I can see those beautiful grey eyes
And that broad smile that lit up my world,that made my life worthwhile

I still remember the day when death took you away
I saw around and realized that everyone's world was upside down
The day you died
Everyone cried
But i kept your promise
The promise that you made me keep
And that's the reason not a tear tickled down my eye.

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Post by Cassi32 » 22 Mar 2019, 05:49

I really like this

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