The Artistry of God

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Omokhuwa Mary-Anne Abekhe
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The Artistry of God

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When beauty is painted with colors
I see her on rainbow's brow
I see the haughtiness of peacocks
I understand why they feel proud

I see the lowliness of butterfies
I see the meekness of their wings
I see the happiness in their hearts
I understand why they feel glad
And i will tell you i f you wont doubt.

It is the touch of Grace and love
It is the artistry of God
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Post by Chigozie Anuli Mbadugha »

Hmm! Very nice poem. I never really thought of butterflies as lowly though... My favorite lines were:
I see the happiness in their hearts
I understand why they feel glad
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Post by Makenzi1986 »

Wow! God is artistic and geneous.
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Wow me love the poem it's awesome
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Post by ReyvrexQuestor Reyes »

Truly, God is magnanimous with His creation. They all serve to glorify, to be as blessings, and always with grace to humankind. Thanks for sharing your poem.
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Post by hismercysurrounding »

Great little poem! Indeed, God's artistry is amazing!

I would just correct the line "And i will tell you i f you wont doubt" to "And I will tell you if you won't doubt."
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Post by Omokhuwa Mary-Anne Abekhe »

We see the hand of God in all creations. God expresses His love by creativity .
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