A Dream To Be We

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A Dream To Be We

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The walls were bathed in the morning sun's rays
Her beauty glowing delightfully
The guitar's rib firmly placed on her thigh
Her fingers strumming patterns
She was concentrating on the acoustic melodies

The dry figs an emblem of the long summer Jacky had finished the first semester
Now she had more time
Time to practice on how to play a guitar
At the corner I stare
I swear she can't even see me
Weak are my knees
Clean are my sleeves

Music blows my ears
Choices blind my vision
I can't help but wish this is fiction
How wonderful is her smile
I am stressed of her fetish
It's a feeling I can't relish
How will she split her love
Is it the music or my melody
Will it be my heart beat or the strings


I stare relentlessly as the cords stretch
How unfulfilling is it to wish you had it all
A feeling of seeking love is taking toll
Roll with me dear
Skip the games, please hear
Here I am waiting for your love
I wish she could have me
A dream to become we
Discipline is the bridge between goals and accomplishment.
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Shae loves music more than she loves you 😢😢💔
This is a beautiful piece.
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