Original Poetry

Use this forum to post poetry that you have written. This is for getting comments and constructive feedback. This is for original, creative works. You must post the actual text, no links. Only one poem per topic please.
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uriah8
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Original Poetry

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Ring Around A Rhyme

I had a problem posed to me
A job so hard it's true
To write a verse of poetry
So witty and so new
I tell this to you now my friends
As I take my pen in hand
And write a little bit of truth
With the words I could command

Laird Hartley

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Nisha Ward
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Post by Nisha Ward »

Oh, this is absolutely delightful. I love it.
"...while a book has got to be worthwhile from the point of view of the reader it's got to be worthwhile from the point of view of the writer as well." - Terry Pratchett on The Last Continent and his writing.

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Post by ReyvrexQuestor Reyes »

How wonderful is the feeling I get to read poems like this.
I delight in rhymed lines.

Thanks for sharing.
"In the beginning was the word.........John 1:1"
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It's very beautiful

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Post by Tobewankenobe »

It's a lovely rhyming poem! It's so fun to see the mix of poetry types, open form, and classical rhyming structure all together. I hope you've written more!

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