LOAD OF LUST ON LOVE.

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Mr Literatus
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LOAD OF LUST ON LOVE.

Post by Mr Literatus » 06 Mar 2019, 20:07

MR LITERATUS(C).

LOAD OF LUST ON LOVE.

Pharaoh in trouble.
Lost his chariot,
Lost his soul to sea,
Call him not crazy,
He only trust the path,
In the midst of the sea.

Like this ancient path,
So narrow and treacherous,
I mean like a Silva lining,
In a broad confused sky,
So foggy and cloudy,
Like a blind eye
On the head of its owner.

Love lawn narrowly,
An enticing path,
Amidst a luring sea,
Embroidered by traps
Side by side,
Love try to be fair,
But lust only gives fear.

On the road of love,
I see countless vows
Losing their courses,
I see sorrowful tears,
Flowing on disappointments,
I see many lovely seeds,
Growing rueful lust at the end.

As moses left the dry land,
Pharaoh tried his luck,
But the sea was treacherous,
When love leaves one heart,
Lust shall try his luck,
But the sea shall lose its temper,
And drown whoever walks in it.

#GREATMIND.

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Post by angellove123 » 07 Mar 2019, 00:34

Oh! T'was so deep and going deeper, I found this poem realistic, and completely amazing. The 4th stanza pinched my heart a little bit.

Great work btw!

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