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ByDraxyss
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August, 2002

Dear Diary:

Today I became a thief. I really must say that I couldn't
help it. I had been thinking for a while about the possibility of committing that theft and finally today I was given the opportunity. I confess that the article I got was the one I really have been wanting for several summers now. I couldn’t control myself and I quickly took it. The surprised face of its previous owner was priceless! He looked really puzzled, and I just smirked; congratulating myself on my daring. Ah ... I am a complete scoundrel, I know. But opportunities such as these occur once in a lifetime. If I wasted it I am convinced that I would have regrets for the rest of my life. Tonight I happily go to sleep.
Yess.

Not far from there someone else was also writing...

Dear Diary:

Horror!!! Tonight a catastrophe happened, a disaster, without a doubt Troy burned!
My poor heart was broken into a thousand pieces. It hurts! I have been told that Yess has stolen what I longed to achieve. It's not fair. Dammit! That very so @#$% has stolen Anthony, the kiss I was waiting for.
Yade.
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😂Nice one. Life's unfair.
You have a life to live. If you ain't living it, that's failure. :tiphat:
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Post by Mina Obeng »

This is a very interesting presentation
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