50-word horror story

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Abraham Joy
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50-word horror story

Post by Abraham Joy » 04 Dec 2019, 11:33

Okay. I saw this theme somewhere, and thought to engage our creativity here. Below is my own 50-word horror.


I always spend my leave with my grandpa in his magnificent country house. Now, I an sketching the old man who is relaxing in a cane chair, few feet from me. My phone beeps with a message from my dad.

'Been tryna reach you. My Pa died three nights ago.'

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Post by Ben Moore » 04 Dec 2019, 15:50

Nice! I really like the idea of super short horror stories. This is a great example. It entirely swings on the last 6 words!
'All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling' - Oscar Wilde
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