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English writing

Posted: 10 Mar 2019, 04:36
by Fatima tuz zahrra
Once it was 12o’clock , i was coming back from work there was total silence at all in the mid of the night and there was no one on the road except darkness. After covering some distance i meet a man on the way , i asked that man that where does this road leads to? The man was silent meanehile i saw his feet which were on the other direction hos toes was in opposite sides . I had listened from his elders that the person with wrong feet is not a human but a giant. Noticing this i ran fast on the road after covering a distance of some kilometers i met a rikshaw driver, i started begging the driver to take me away fast from here. Driver asked that what happend why are oy so frightened and your are not breathing well.I told him all the story happend to me that i met a man whose feet were like a giant . The driver putt his shoes off and showed me that were the feet like this ? I was like dead!

Re: English writing

Posted: 29 Apr 2019, 21:35
by DC Brown
You are learning English very well. You might want to try a grammar correcting program like Grammarly. It would point out minor mistakes like not capitalizing 'i' when you are speaking of yourself. Nice story! I hope you write more.