Yes, I love poetry and tend to have very strong opinions on it! Poetry holds the broken heart of the world, and in it, all the light that seeps through those cracks. Do you like poetry too? I'd love to talk with you about it.Kaylawallace523 wrote: ↑24 Jun 2019, 23:04With the examples you gave, I agree. Poetry should flow naturally, not be forced.The sentence is protracted and heavy, using a lot of dense words. The metaphorical image it created in my mind was that of a few bricks that someone had laid out in order to make a wall. Unfortunately, that person had forgotten to lay out the mortar that brought them all together.
Thank you for the review. I am guessing that you chose the book to review because you enjoy poetry. I'm glad there are still people that do.
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Yes, that's exactly what happened! Thanks for always stopping by, unamilagra, I really appreciate it!unamilagra wrote: ↑27 Jun 2019, 14:08 It's too bad this collection was such a mess. it sounds like the author really wanted to get his thoughts out there but wasn't able to make it happen.
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Yes! I love poetry. I read it and I write it. I only write for myself. I have a talent for it, but I was becoming afraid of its extinction until I stumbled across these forums. I love your description. Beautiful.nooregano wrote: ↑27 Jun 2019, 23:07Yes, I love poetry and tend to have very strong opinions on it! Poetry holds the broken heart of the world, and in it, all the light that seeps through those cracks. Do you like poetry too? I'd love to talk with you about it.Kaylawallace523 wrote: ↑24 Jun 2019, 23:04With the examples you gave, I agree. Poetry should flow naturally, not be forced.The sentence is protracted and heavy, using a lot of dense words. The metaphorical image it created in my mind was that of a few bricks that someone had laid out in order to make a wall. Unfortunately, that person had forgotten to lay out the mortar that brought them all together.
Thank you for the review. I am guessing that you chose the book to review because you enjoy poetry. I'm glad there are still people that do.
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