Official Review: Larkin's Choice by Eliza Broughton

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Official Review: Larkin's Choice by Eliza Broughton

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[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Larkin's Choice" by Eliza Broughton.]
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3 out of 4 stars
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Larkin’s Choice by Eliza Broughton follows Larkin Sims. She is a military veteran who owns several gyms and teaches self-defense. She decided to open them because she was raped as a teenager and wanted to help others learn to defend themselves. Her business is thriving, but her love life is a bit of a mess. She keeps having dreams about a man, Peter, she sees during her daily run. In her dreams, he is perfect. Eventually, she works up the nerve to speak to him in real life. He gives her a proposal, which could bring her dreams into reality. All she must do is pretend to be his girlfriend for a few weeks while he vies for a place as the CEO of a family company. Meanwhile, she makes friends with Jason as she helps his mother with a stalker. Jason, a brilliant scientist, is working on a time machine. He promises her that when it works, he will take her back in time to meet her ancestor William Sims, an American abolitionist.

My favorite part of this book was the insight into early United States history. It gave a vivid picture of abolitionists after the American Revolutionary War. It taught me a lot about how they worked to smuggle slaves out of the south. It also described how slave hunters would do anything to bring back runaways, even bringing back the wrong person to get the reward. This was my favorite part of the novel.

There were a decent number of grammatical issues, though. They were mostly missing commas and didn’t negatively impact my reading experience. However, because they were rather frequent, I will have to take away a star from the rating. Besides these issues, there was nothing I disliked about this book.

Ignoring the grammatical issues, this was a well-written novel. The language was precise, and the imagery was on point. I think Broughton spent a great deal of time working with the prose. The flow was natural and compelling. I also think the pacing was excellent. It nicely complemented the building tension throughout the book.

I award this book a rating of 3 out of 4 stars. The only reason I am taking away a star is because of the grammatical issues. I think anyone who enjoys historical fiction would greatly enjoy this book. It gave an interesting view of post-revolution America. It also gave a good look into the abolitionist movement. Since it had a time-travel twist, there was an interesting juxtaposition of modern ideas with those of the time period. If you are interested in American history, this is the book for you.

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Post by Scarlet Nicoll »

Ok, I don't get it! What has her affair with her dream guy got to do with meeting a time traveler who'll take her to meet her ancestors? Confusing. Thanks!
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I'm not usually into historical fiction, but I do enjoy a good time travel novel. This one does sound intriguing despite the issues. Hopefully the author can get those fixed. Thanks for the review.
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I do enjoy historical fiction as well as science fiction. Therefore, I think I would really enjoy this book, aside from the grammatical errors, and that doesn't seem to interfere with the story. Thank you for a well-written review!
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Post by Nisha Ward »

Well, that twist hit like a whammy to the back. It sounds like a lot but who knows. I might enjoy it.
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Larkin must have been terribly broken. Beeing raped as a teenager isn't the nicest thing and usually it messes up with one's love life growing up. Thanks for a great informative review.
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The story of a military veteran who owns several gyms and teaches self-defense sounds interesting. Also sounds like a good time - travel book.
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I don't usually read historical fiction, so I'll pass on this one. Thanks for the great review!
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I am not really a fan of time travel, however, I do enjoy a good love story. The part about Larkin Sims pretending to be Peter's girlfriend. :D :D :D . It also seems like a well-written story apart from the few grammatical errors. Thanks for a good review. You summed everything up so nicely! :tiphat:
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Post by SweetPee7 »

I'm retired US Air Force and love historical fiction, romance, and time travel. This book has it all for me! I'd like to see if a love triangle develops between Eliza, Peter, and Jason. I've read several books on the south and slavery, so this one sounds like a good addition. Thanks for a great review.
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This novel covers an interesting range of topics: self-defense, rape, time travel,slavery, etc. The history sections do sound interesting and I would like to read what the author has written about that time period. Great review!
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I am always interested in reading fascinating historical books. This one seems to offer a lot of information on the abolitionists whom I have not read much about. I would, therefore, like to read this book. Thanks for the review.
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