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Official Review: Chasing the Red Queen by Karen Glista

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[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Chasing the Red Queen" by Karen Glista.]
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Six years after her father’s tragic death, Donja Bellanger still struggles to adjust to life without him. When her mother decides to remarry, Donja is forced to leave her friends and the place she calls home to live with her new family in Sault Ste. Marie, Michigan. It does not take long before her life begins to spiral out of control. When a visit to an exclusive club for elites gains her the attention of the handsome Torin Mancini, who is an Iridescent (a powerful ancient spirit), her blood lures him in, and he finds himself strangely attracted to her. Except, he is not the only one who has her in his sights. A deadly predator, who has murdered several Chippewa girls on both sides of the Canada-United States border has picked up her scent and is dying to get a taste of her blood. Will Torin’s feelings for Donja overcome his primal instincts to feed on her blood or will he be her undoing? If not, will Donja end up falling prey to the murderous and bloodthirsty predator?

Chasing the Red Queen by Karen Glista is a captivating, paranormal romance novel that takes readers on a thrilling and fun but dangerous adventure into the world of Ojibwe spirits, special bloodlines, and vampire-like creatures. Written in the third-person point of view, we get to follow the two main characters (Donja and Torin) intermittently until their worlds meet. This made things interesting as we got to know both characters and their different worlds separately; thus, the moment they finally met, their interactions were all the more fascinating.

The spell-binding narrative brilliantly blended elements of mysticism, romance, and murder-mystery. The story is elevated further by its well-developed characters; their backstories, relationships, strengths, and weaknesses made them feel genuine. The author’s use of description and world-building were commendable. As a result, I found myself completely immersed in the characters’ world and the events that took place.

Parts of the narrative, such as a physically intimate relationship between a seventeen-year-old and a twenty-six-year-old, may shock some readers. I wondered if this was legal in real life, and a quick Google search revealed that the age of consent in Michigan (where most of the narrative takes place) is sixteen, but raised to eighteen when the older party is an authority figure. The older party in the narrative is a detective; therefore, their interactions bordered on the illegal. The author unapologetically took a no-holds-barred approach when it came to writing the vivid description of the sex-scene and murdered victims; these intimate details and gory description added to the intensity of the novel.

Even though the book is well-written, the copy I read could use a round of professional editing. Donja’s step-sister, Mikayla, was called ‘Makayla’ and ‘Makala’ in different parts of the book. Donja’s grandmother, Anna Bellanger, was known as Anna Nolan before she got married, but another part of the book implied that she was ‘Anna Beaty’ before her marriage. Another inconsistency was when Lisa, Donja’s mum, at one point, tells Anna that Gage took the necessary steps to protect Frankie, but at another says it was Torin. Grammatical errors I noticed include missing articles, pronouns, and quotation marks, as well as the use of ‘now’ in place of ‘how,’ ‘interrupt’ instead of ‘interpret,’ and so on.

Overall, the storyline and plot-twists made for an enchanting narrative. The author also did a fantastic job in wrapping up the narrative. I would recommend this novel to fans of paranormal romance and those who are not put-off by the flaws mentioned in this review. Because of the inconsistencies and errors found, I deducted one point. I, therefore, rate this book 3 out of 4 stars.

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I'm not sure I could get past the grammatical errors, to say nothing of the author painting illegal relationships in a forgiving light. At the very least, it's good to see a relatively original take on the paranormal romance genre.
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Well written review! I looked into reviewing this book. I have mixed feelings about passing on it. It sounds like it was a pretty entertaining read, but I'm easily distracted by a lack of thorough editing/proofreading.
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Well, it does sound like an intriguing story, but I would not enjoy the explicit nature of the book. I am unsure about the relationship between a 17 year old and a 26 year old as well because it would be considered illegal. I'm unsure why she HAD to be 17. Couldn't the author have raised her age by just one year? Thanks for the review, but I'm going to avoid this one.
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Your first paragraph actually put me in the frame of mind of Twilight, a book that started out with the heroine falling deeply in love with a vampire who had initially wanted to kill her due to her scent, a heroine who also ends up being chased by other beings who would kill her. But it seems like the differences end there and I'd like to read this, partly for comparing purposes. It's very difficult to offend me, so I'll easily overlook the violence and sex scenes and "illegal" relationship and just try to enjoy the story for what it is. Thanks so much for the introduction!
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I don't care for the underage sexual relationship aspect. I like my reading material to be pretty PG/PG-13. Certain similarities reminded me of Twilight which isn't necessarily a bad thing. Overall, it's a no for me, but I did like your review.
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CommMayo wrote: 20 Mar 2018, 09:11 Well written review! I looked into reviewing this book. I have mixed feelings about passing on it. It sounds like it was a pretty entertaining read, but I'm easily distracted by a lack of thorough editing/proofreading.
Thanks! It really was, haha, you missed out.
kandscreeley wrote: 20 Mar 2018, 09:25 Well, it does sound like an intriguing story, but I would not enjoy the explicit nature of the book. I am unsure about the relationship between a 17 year old and a 26 year old as well because it would be considered illegal. I'm unsure why she HAD to be 17. Couldn't the author have raised her age by just one year? Thanks for the review, but I'm going to avoid this one.
As I read the book, I didn't think anything physical would happen between the two until she at least turned 18. I was surprised that the author chose to go that route, but I wasn't offended. I didn't see any reason why she couldn't have been 18 when it happened. So yea, her being 17 wasn't integral to the plot.
MsTri wrote: 21 Mar 2018, 02:04 Your first paragraph actually put me in the frame of mind of Twilight, a book that started out with the heroine falling deeply in love with a vampire who had initially wanted to kill her due to her scent, a heroine who also ends up being chased by other beings who would kill her. But it seems like the differences end there and I'd like to read this, partly for comparing purposes. It's very difficult to offend me, so I'll easily overlook the violence and sex scenes and "illegal" relationship and just try to enjoy the story for what it is. Thanks so much for the introduction!
That's great, enjoy!
SABRADLEY wrote: 21 Mar 2018, 14:19 I don't care for the underage sexual relationship aspect. I like my reading material to be pretty PG/PG-13. Certain similarities reminded me of Twilight which isn't necessarily a bad thing. Overall, it's a no for me, but I did like your review.
Thanks.
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I was enticed by the scent of your review; I could almost smell Donja's (I love that name!) blood myself. Lol!

It seems the author has a passion for the shocking; even the typos are something else. How I wish authors would be more serious about proofing their work.

Thanks for the thorough review, Ritah! Well done!
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I am a big gooey goop when it comes to paranormal romances, especially the ones with well-developed characters and well-described relationships.

Beautifully written review! 👏🏼
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I love stories with an age gap so that isnt a problem for me, the gory scenes might be though. On a sidenote, can an ancient spirit be only twenty six years old?
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ritah wrote: 19 Mar 2018, 04:23 [Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Chasing the Red Queen" by Karen Glista.]
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Six years after her father’s tragic death, Donja Bellanger still struggles to adjust to life without him. When her mother decides to remarry, Donja is forced to leave her friends and the place she calls home to live with her new family in Sault Ste. Marie, Michigan. It does not take long before her life begins to spiral out of control. When a visit to an exclusive club for elites gains her the attention of the handsome Torin Mancini, who is an Iridescent (a powerful ancient spirit), her blood lures him in, and he finds himself strangely attracted to her. Except, he is not the only one who has her in his sights. A deadly predator, who has murdered several Chippewa girls on both sides of the Canada-United States border has picked up her scent and is dying to get a taste of her blood. Will Torin’s feelings for Donja overcome his primal instincts to feed on her blood or will he be her undoing? If not, will Donja end up falling prey to the murderous and bloodthirsty predator?

Chasing the Red Queen by Karen Glista is a captivating, paranormal romance novel that takes readers on a thrilling and fun but dangerous adventure into the world of Ojibwe spirits, special bloodlines, and vampire-like creatures. Written in the third-person point of view, we get to follow the two main characters (Donja and Torin) intermittently until their worlds meet. This made things interesting as we got to know both characters and their different worlds separately; thus, the moment they finally met, their interactions were all the more fascinating.

The spell-binding narrative brilliantly blended elements of mysticism, romance, and murder-mystery. The story is elevated further by its well-developed characters; their backstories, relationships, strengths, and weaknesses made them feel genuine. The author’s use of description and world-building were commendable. As a result, I found myself completely immersed in the characters’ world and the events that took place.

Parts of the narrative, such as a physically intimate relationship between a seventeen-year-old and a twenty-six-year-old, may shock some readers. I wondered if this was legal in real life, and a quick Google search revealed that the age of consent in Michigan (where most of the narrative takes place) is sixteen, but raised to eighteen when the older party is an authority figure. The older party in the narrative is a detective; therefore, their interactions bordered on the illegal. The author unapologetically took a no-holds-barred approach when it came to writing the vivid description of the sex-scene and murdered victims; these intimate details and gory description added to the intensity of the novel.

Even though the book is well-written, the copy I read could use a round of professional editing. Donja’s step-sister, Mikayla, was called ‘Makayla’ and ‘Makala’ in different parts of the book. Donja’s grandmother, Anna Bellanger, was known as Anna Nolan before she got married, but another part of the book implied that she was ‘Anna Beaty’ before her marriage. Another inconsistency was when Lisa, Donja’s mum, at one point, tells Anna that Gage took the necessary steps to protect Frankie, but at another says it was Torin. Grammatical errors I noticed include missing articles, pronouns, and quotation marks, as well as the use of ‘now’ in place of ‘how,’ ‘interrupt’ instead of ‘interpret,’ and so on.

Overall, the storyline and plot-twists made for an enchanting narrative. The author also did a fantastic job in wrapping up the narrative. I would recommend this novel to fans of paranormal romance and those who are not put-off by the flaws mentioned in this review. Because of the inconsistencies and errors found, I deducted one point. I, therefore, rate this book 3 out of 4 stars.

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Very well written! I would be interested in taking a look, but I don't know if I could get pass the grammatical errors and inconsistent character names.
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Although I love paranormal romances, I tend to avoid those with vampires or vampire-like creatures. I could get over the age gap but I have a hard time reading gory scenes (hence why I avoid vampires). This seemed interesting at first and I liked the cover and title but there isn't enough here for me to read this one. Nice review, thanks for your insights.
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Thanks for this detailed review! This novel sounds like a fascinating fantasy that gets away from the medieval European-based cliches and explores the beliefs of an indigenous culture, which makes it all-too-rare. It sounds really well done overall, even with the typos.

As for the possibly questionable relationship, I've found that it is best to wait to read how that sort of thing is presented in context before rushing to conclusions.

I'll put this one on my shelf.
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The storyline sounds unique and captivating. However, the errors really turn me off so I don't think it's for me.
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CommMayo wrote: 20 Mar 2018, 09:11 Well written review! I looked into reviewing this book. I have mixed feelings about passing on it. It sounds like it was a pretty entertaining read, but I'm easily distracted by a lack of thorough editing/proofreading.
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The graphic gory and intercourse scenes will be too much for me so I will pass on this one.
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