Official Review: Two Things That Make Us Whole by J.J. Coby

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Official Review: Two Things That Make Us Whole by J.J. Coby

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[Following is an official OnlineBookClub.org review of "Two Things That Make Us Whole" by J.J. Coby.]
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4 out of 4 stars
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Two Things That Make Us Whole, by J.J. Coby, centers around a young woman whose grief over her miscarriages has created a rift in her relationships with her loved ones.

After a drunken night leads to a black eye, Jaylee’s grief after three miscarriages and one failed childbirth has peaked to the point where she can no longer hold back. As she confronts her husband, Jared, about their failing marriage, he coldly tells her he wants a divorce. Meanwhile, her father-in-law, Kevin, decides to visit them. At first, Jaylee is unsure of why Kevin is there, but after accompanying him to the doctor it becomes clear that he is there for more than to visit. As Kevin tries to help her get her life back on track, Jaylee discovers that the road to healing is just as bumpy as the road to destruction.

While the book is listed under romance, it is not your typical romance novel. It starts off with a marriage that is teetering on the edge of ruin combined with an estranged father-in-law who does not hold back his personal opinions. It really delves deep into Jaylee’s mind and explores her struggles and fears. You see things from Jaylee’s perspective which gives you a first-hand account of all her thoughts and feelings. I liked how the author set it up this way because you could see the progression of Jaylee’s character. Her father-in-law is also an interesting character. He was the pushing stone that helped her step into the right direction.

What I liked the most about the book was the dialogue between Jaylee and Kevin. It ranged from funny, sarcastic banter to heartbreaking realizations. I thought that the bond between then was lifelike and relatable. Moreover, the book had some deep themes that include marital problems, cheating, miscarriages, stillbirths, depression, alcohol problems, relationship problems, cancer, and loss of loved ones. Even though there is not much sexual content, the topics discussed in the book are geared towards adult readers, so I would not recommend this book for younger readers.

Overall, I rate this book 4 out of 4 stars. I was thoroughly engaged throughout the book, and there was nothing that I disliked about it. I only noticed one grammatical error, but otherwise, the book was clear of any other errors. I would recommend this book to readers who enjoy character-driven stories that focus on rekindling relationships.

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I cannot begin to imagine the pain Jaylee went through as a result of the losses she suffered. My heart is already heavy, I think I will give this book a pass for now. Thank you for the review!
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I love that this is not a typical romance novel. Thanks so much for your enlightening review.
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It seems like the type of book that'll affect you emotionally in many ways when you read it. Beautiful review!
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I love the fact I could relate with this book, I could imagine the pain Jaylee must have been through during the miscarriages and failed marriage and still, her husband had the nerve to file for a divorce
This story is touchy and I could relate
Thanks for this review
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This sounds like an intriguing story. I love when stories are very real and relatable. Nice review!
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The themes this book is centered on are so real and relatable. I think this book will make an interesting read for so many people- me inclusive. Thanks for the review.
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This review alone has me wanting more of this book. It sounds like a really emotional and eye-opening book. And this review did the book justice.
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It kind of mirrors the typical real-life romance story. Thanks for the review
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Its amazing to tell the story of the hardships that realities of life brings to women sometimes. As much as one would like to avoid the experience, it is important to go through these stories through the eyes of the survivor. Feel what it feels like to walk a mile in their shoes.
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The book seems to be based on relationship matters.
Thanks for the review.
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I think the cover also explains the book in some way.
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Although this is not close to what I would usually choose to read, it does sound like a heart-breaking and relatable story. I can’t even begin to imagine what it must be like to walk in her shoes. Thank you for your detailed review!
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This sounds like an emotional read. Thanks for the review. It must be enjoyable.
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This sounds very intense. It is hard to read books about abuse, but I like that this one has a hopeful ending. Thanks for your review!
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