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Re: Official Review: The time we have by aastha madhur

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This sounds like a beautiful story. I like that Matt and Lea seem to have chemistry, as I feel like that aspect can either make or break a love story. I'll have to try this one out. Thanks for the review!
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What a compelling review about this young couple! You have made this book look really interesting, in spite of the errors. Your reasons for putting down the book were very convincing! Thanks for the wonderful recommendation.
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I loved the casual way the author built the conversations and the relationship between the two main characters. Their words flowed effortlessly, and I found myself immersed in their witty and thought-provoking dialog.
Very few things ruin a book like stilted, unnatural dialogue. It sounds as if this author gets it right! Thanks for such a thorough review! :D :D
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maggi3 wrote: 16 Jun 2019, 17:55 This sounds like a beautiful story. I like that Matt and Lea seem to have chemistry, as I feel like that aspect can either make or break a love story. I'll have to try this one out. Thanks for the review!
They did have great chemistry and they shared the same philosophies. Hope you do get the chance to read this one. Thanks so much for commenting!
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kdstrack wrote: 16 Jun 2019, 19:13 What a compelling review about this young couple! You have made this book look really interesting, in spite of the errors. Your reasons for putting down the book were very convincing! Thanks for the wonderful recommendation.
I don't think I use that many Kleenex when I'm sick- :) Thank you, kdstrack, for your lovely comments!
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sarahmarlowe wrote: 17 Jun 2019, 12:00
I loved the casual way the author built the conversations and the relationship between the two main characters. Their words flowed effortlessly, and I found myself immersed in their witty and thought-provoking dialog.
Very few things ruin a book like stilted, unnatural dialogue. It sounds as if this author gets it right! Thanks for such a thorough review! :D :D
Yes, the author definitely got it right. Thanks so much, Sarah, for reading my review and commenting!
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I do enjoy a good romance now and then and this novel certainly seems to be an interesting read. It's too bad about the errors, but I hope the author fixes those soon. Thanks for a wonderful review!
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I enjoyed reading your review and it has peaked my interest in reading this story. I will be adding it to my bookshelf. I am glad to see that the editing mistake won't take to much away from the reading itself, though I do wish that the author would have gotten it professionally edited to make sure it had all the effort involved to help a great story.
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Lea seems like she's had a tough life, so it's nice that she finds something in Matt. Unfortunately that's not enough to get me to tead what sounds like a poignant romance. Thanks for the review.
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Prisallen wrote: 17 Jun 2019, 16:53 I do enjoy a good romance now and then and this novel certainly seems to be an interesting read. It's too bad about the errors, but I hope the author fixes those soon. Thanks for a wonderful review!
I think another round of editing would make for a stellar novel. It reminded me of Nicholas Sparks' type of story. Thank you, Prisallen, for reading and for your comments! :)
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hannahbhill33 wrote: 18 Jun 2019, 23:52 I enjoyed reading your review and it has peaked my interest in reading this story. I will be adding it to my bookshelf. I am glad to see that the editing mistake won't take to much away from the reading itself, though I do wish that the author would have gotten it professionally edited to make sure it had all the effort involved to help a great story.
I hope that she gets the errors corrected also, so the book gets the credit that it deserves. Thank you so much, Hannah, for reading my review and for your comments.
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Nisha Ward wrote: 21 Jun 2019, 01:46 Lea seems like she's had a tough life, so it's nice that she finds something in Matt. Unfortunately that's not enough to get me to tead what sounds like a poignant romance. Thanks for the review.
Definitely a poignant romance. Thank you, Nisha, for reading my review and for commenting!
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I think that I would like to read this book. It sounds like the type of romance novel that I would read. Thanks for the review!
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Magnify3 wrote: 01 Jul 2019, 04:27 I think that I would like to read this book. It sounds like the type of romance novel that I would read. Thanks for the review!
It was a book I did not want to end. Thank you, Magnify3, for your comments! :)
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