Yeah, I do think that that might have been the case. Hopefully, it will be revised. Thanks for the comment!Tomah wrote: ↑02 Oct 2019, 10:55 I'm not into religious books, but the concept of a retelling of the Bible in a fantasy setting sounds intriguing. It's a shame the execution is lacking though. I think the author might've run into the problem of having a fully fleshed idea (after all, the Bible has been out there for a while) but failing to properly convey it to the readers through the setting and characters. Thanks for the review!
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Indeed, it was more like a rough draft than a proper book. It is definitely not easy to weave biblical parallels into a story, and to do it well. Thanks for stopping by to leave a comment!Nisha Ward wrote: ↑04 Oct 2019, 17:14 Ouch. I've found that, often enough, direct religious analogies in a fantasy setting are either really easy to do or extremely hard, and it sounds like the author has stumbled into the second category. I'm sure the issues you highlighted are the cause of this book not working and I do wonder if the author even actually got this past more than one editing process, particularly since it sounds like this actually needs to be longer to work with the Biblical parallels.
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Thank you for stopping by to leave a comment!Mbrooks2518 wrote: ↑17 Oct 2019, 04:03 Seems like this book needs a complete rewrite. Thanks for the great, thorough review!
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