Official Review: The Descent of the Phoenix

[kandscreeley]

it is great to see a book that has a wide audience.

A story about that "lacks technology" seems attractive and interesting read.

Moreover, From the review I can seem that is one in the fantasy genre.

It's a great little throwback to a simpler time, but the characters have some great adventures. Thanks for commenting.

[Kyoks]

This book must be something you need to concentrate on to understand the indept of concepts in it.

[kandscreeley]

This book must be something you need to concentrate on to understand the indept of concepts in it.

The concepts weren't that difficult, but the editing was lacking. Thanks for commenting!

[Devika menon]

The example of description that you have given is perfect and makes me want to read this book. Characters who are well presented with an emotional connection with the readers sounds like a book I would read. Hopefully the errors are corrected. Thanks for the review!

[kandscreeley]

The example of description that you have given is perfect and makes me want to read this book. Characters who are well presented with an emotional connection with the readers sounds like a book I would read. Hopefully the errors are corrected. Thanks for the review!

The book has much merit. I would recommend it just for the action and character development. Thanks!

[Nisha Ward]

For a story like this, I can't look past the editing. It would be too distracting. Pity, because it sounds cool.

[kandscreeley]

For a story like this, I can't look past the editing. It would be too distracting. Pity, because it sounds cool.

I understand. Hopefully the author will get that fixed, and you can take another look at it. Thanks for commenting.