What would you change?

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Just the part where Cain married his elder sister, found it quite awkward, but still the author did a great job.
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I wouldn't change anything! I just wish the author made more reference to his book being a FICTION so as not to confuse people
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I woudn't change anything about the storyline. I enjoy the author's perspective and aproach to the Bible's scriptures.
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Yes, a narrative I felt went out of place is the cutting down of the tree of life by Enoch and Cain at the end of this novel.
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The things I would change are about the Bible itself and not about Killib Abel. I enjoyed throughout and I think it's an amazing read.
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I wouldn't remove or change anything about this book, the author did exceptionally well with the character development of this book, Kudos to him.
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I would change Cain's identity. Cain was represented as a hunter, while originally, in the Bible, he was a farmer. Representing both Cain and Abel as hunters didn't sit right with me.
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I like that you stated that the book is well-written but like you said I wish every reader would know for sure that it's not the real thing, and it's only written from the author's perspective.
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the author was very skillful and creative about his writing. Although he over exaggerated some of the stories in this book, i still enjoyed reading these new things. Aside the title there is absolutely nothing I would want to change about this book.
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If I had to change one thing from this fantastic book I would say Noah's story. I feel like his character was semi-lacking, more details could have been written to describe who Noah was, possibly as a father or a son. Another thing I would change is placing more specific lessons for fathers' to take from this book since this book was primarily for fathers'.
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They are lots of things that I would have said it's out of place. But I remember that it's the author's story and imagination.
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I wont change anything except that it could have been put in every page and every chapter that it should not be alternated to the bible.
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I did not like the stories about Cain and Eva, so if I had the opportunity, I would definitely change that.
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I would not change anything, apart from the fact that I wished Cain repented
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Post by Samuel Onowhakpor »

There was not out of place in my opinion. Every one of the characters had their stories told in a manner that can't be overly critized, as this is a work of fiction.
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