What changes you would make in the book, if you were the author?

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Arimart99
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Re: What changes you would make in the book, if you were the author?

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I would make the book longer in order to try and expand more the relationship between Cynthia and Sky, it just seemed so rushed and unbelievable the way it was written and it just made Sky look like a possible bad guy since the very beginning. I would give them more time to fall in love to make it more believable and make Sky more likeable to the reader so that when Cynthia suspects that he is a terrorist, it can be more of a shock to the reader.

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I would make the characters more understandable and relatable, and also change the beggining of Cynthia's and sky's love story so it won't start as a manipulation.

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