What changes you would make in the book, if you were the author?

[Chimezie Agbata]

I so much agree with you. If I was the author, I would also change the title of the book to Cynthia and Sky instead of the present title. Dan played a very minor ole to be featured as the title of this book.

[Amanda Warner]

The relationship between Cynthia and Dan ended in a flash, like they never dated; that wasn't a good one for me. I would have made Dan a more important character than making him look like a loser and later hated by everyone. I would have also worked on Cynthia's character so she didn't look cheap and easy to get.

[Goody book]

I think I will do a lot of work on the character aspect. The characters need a lot of work. I think I will make the characters look real while reading.

[Unique Mary Iloakasia]

I would want Cynthia to tell Sky about the miscarriage.

[Roderick Voss]

Cynthia's love life will be altered by me. I'll have to rewrite something to force Cynthia to choose between Sky and Dan.

[Fentymak]

I would change some of the decisions made by Cynthia. She was too free with Sky. I would also change Dan's approach to Cynthia.

[Peace Essien 3]

I would remove the one night stand part with Sky. Cynthia fell too easy and it made a caricature of her part as an agent who could detect terrorist attacks but have sex with a complete stranger.

[Mercylib]

I agree, the book was alright. To me, it seemed like it was two books: the spy thriller and the romance novel. It didn't do well as either one. Perhaps if the author picked one to concentrate on it would've turned out better?

[Andrew Darlington]

From the start I would first go for the title. I would change it to Cynthia and Sky. Sky seemed to be everywhere all through the story.

[Samuel Okoye 2]

One sure change if I were the author would be scrapping out the one-night-stand. Next would be making Cynthia less naive.