Review by Amberlily -- The Gryphon by Paula Grover

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Review by Amberlily -- The Gryphon by Paula Grover

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[Following is a volunteer review of "The Gryphon" by Paula Grover.]
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The Gryphon by Paula Grover is a YA fantasy novel that explores the “gryphonic” lifestyle and political system of gryphons in Gryphonia, their capital. The name of their capital was silly to me at first, but I later grew to enjoy the simplicity of the name because this book provides many more important facts to remember.

All gryphons are female and Gryphonia is administered through a monarchy. One generation is always skipped when it comes to taking over the premiere queen role. The protagonist, Sunsky, is a princess who is soon wishing to take over her grandmother’s part as queen. Her opinicus mate (the male version of a gryphon), Dreamspinner, impregnates Sunsky soon before her transition to queen. On her flight home, Sunsky gets stuck in a storm and crashes down into the lower mountains, breaking her wing in the process. A black-winged stallion takes care of her while she recovers, and she allows him to mate with her out of gratitude. Upon her return, she learns that she is pregnant with Dreamspinner’s son in her womb, as well as an egg from Dreamspinner in her pouch. What surprised her was the presence of a second egg from the winged stallion. This creates a huge problem because this means the second egg contains a hippogryph, which is illegal to hatch within gryphonic society.

The breeding combinations get a bit confusing, but once submerged into the book, you will have all of this knowledge down. A gryphon and an opinicus can create four different kinds of offspring when mated together. They can give birth to gryphons and opinicus, and they can hatch keythongs (male) and kryphons (female), which are the wingless versions of their parents. There are also other matchups to create hippogryphs, winged horses, and even some species that are yet unknown to the gryphons.

What I liked most was that this book plays heavily on the political situation in gryphonic society. They think themselves above any of the wingless creatures and find hippogryphs and winged horses threatening to their power. I feel like this is an excellent book for a young mind to read when considering current events in our own world. This discrimination against the other species gets out of hand and it is up to a group of peaceful protestors to set things straight. It also displays how broken families can be civil with each other as long as they have peace in mind. Overall, I think this book would heavily inspire a young reader to realize that words can be more powerful than weapons.

The only thing I didn’t like about this novel was that there wasn’t a lot of detail in anything aside from the characters. I could tell you the color patterns of every character, but I couldn’t tell you what the capital looks like, how big it is, or how they managed to build a castle. Things like that really bothered me, since none of the species even have opposable thumbs. I was curious about how they were able to have lit candles or make a fire. What really stumped me was that there was a caretaker gryphon that handled the injured or expecting gryphons. They had a device that was able to tell the species and sex of their offspring shortly after conception. I have no idea what the device was or how a gryphon was able to use it. Many things like this pulled me out of the story, and even after finishing the book, I’m clueless. They didn’t appear to have any other sort of technology aside from this one device.

I rate this book 3 out of 4 stars. It was wonderfully edited as I did not find one grammatical mistake. I had to take one star away just from the sheer confusion I had at times due to the lack of detail. However, I promise you that because Grover put all of her energy into the characters, you will get emotionally attached to them quickly. There are many characters, but they are all introduced slowly, and I found myself caring for a handful of them by the end. I recommend this book to any young reader or any adult who would like to know about gryphonic society. It was a lot of fun learning about all of the different species and what mates are required to create them.

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Seems like the author had a unique idea that needs a little more finessing! One of my favourite parts about fantasy works is the attention the author pays to the little details that make the world so unique, so missing key details like this would bother me immensely! Thanks for you review and I may give this book a try!

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Firefawkes wrote:
19 Mar 2020, 19:33
Seems like the author had a unique idea that needs a little more finessing! One of my favourite parts about fantasy works is the attention the author pays to the little details that make the world so unique, so missing key details like this would bother me immensely! Thanks for you review and I may give this book a try!
Yes! Good fantasy is all in the details. Thanks for stopping by!

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I've often found that the details of a fantasy novel are as important as the characters themselves and it sounds like this one is lacking. It's a real shame because the ideas in here are awesome.
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Nisha Ward wrote:
20 Mar 2020, 09:07
I've often found that the details of a fantasy novel are as important as the characters themselves and it sounds like this one is lacking. It's a real shame because the ideas in here are awesome.
It really was. The characters were great but reading chapters only about them 100% of the time was tiring. Thanks for stopping by!

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The premise is unique, I think, although the mechanics of the breeding process did seem so confusing. I don't know what to think of that scene you mentioned, where one character allowed another "to mate with her out of gratitude." Some parental guidance might be needed here where younger readers are concerned. Otherwise, this is a great review!

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I did find that odd as well to be in a YA novel. It would take some understanding from the reader that these are animals, and their reasons for breeding are very different from ours. They all find breeding an essential part of life to the continuation of their species, whereas we usually put a lot more thought behind such decisions. Thanks for stopping by!

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It sounds like the characters are extremely well-built. It's too bad the world doesn't follow. It seems like the author spent so much time explaining the society that there wasn't time enough to describe the world and technology. Thanks for an in-depth review!
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I have a lot of imagination, but I prefer reading books where the author provides a detailed picture of both the characters and the settings. I totally understand your frustration! Thank you for your an insightful and well-written review.
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kandscreeley wrote:
24 Mar 2020, 20:08
It sounds like the characters are extremely well-built. It's too bad the world doesn't follow. It seems like the author spent so much time explaining the society that there wasn't time enough to describe the world and technology. Thanks for an in-depth review!
I agree, a bit too much of one thing and not enough of the other. I think my review would have read differently if I could have explained some of the settings, but alas, I didn't have the material to do so. Thanks for stopping by!

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espo wrote:
25 Mar 2020, 08:23
I have a lot of imagination, but I prefer reading books where the author provides a detailed picture of both the characters and the settings. I totally understand your frustration! Thank you for your an insightful and well-written review.
I do as well. While I think its okay to leave some of the work to the reader, this was a bit too much for one person to personally imagine and remember. Thanks for stopping by!

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