Short Story Contest 3 Winner - "The Blue Girl" by Shaphat

The deadline for the second contest has already passed and the stories are available for reading. It had a Spring theme, and the winner got a $25 gift certificate. Stay tuned for information regarding another contest!
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How do you rate this story?

1 star - poor, bad
4
7%
2 stars - fair, okay
17
28%
3 stars - good, recommend it
23
38%
4 stars - amazing, excellent
16
27%
 
Total votes: 60

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Prof Darwins
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Re: Short Story Contest 3 Winner - "The Blue Girl" by Shaphat

Post by Prof Darwins »

A terrific tale with instructions to study. Do not want someone evil as it is able to come back to you as well. It's a good one indeed.

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Post by moeintnt »

very good thank you!!! :)

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Post by Harris butt »

thats a nice story but as many said end should be a bit diffrent

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Sometimes all you need is an interesting short story because time ain't on your side and you want a new read. I like it

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Short stories are quite entertaining. I like it, always want the best for all.

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Post by faithr-16 »

Very well written. Definetly keeps you on your toes. 😁 great work. Definitely worth the read 💜

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Post by Olaniran1429 »

Thanks for showing us your writing prowess, I am sure you'll become an amazing author.

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There is always an inner person who is so powerful. It's an interesting read and I loved it.
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A nice story, feels similar to Monkey Paw and the like, a wish that is what you said, but worse. It was good, though I wish there was some kind of twist or explanation to the dream.

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